I think it's got the bones of horror down - the puke-tinge of sky, the slow tension of a decrepit elevator descending and not being quite sure what's inside, the understandable unease of someone silently walking inside your apartment. i even appreciate it pulled the sudden jump cuts from gravity bone / 30 flights of loving. i just think it needed a slightly stronger editing hand, especially in the car scenes (and i mean, i get it - it was a late-night art bell call in show, but also: damn, it went on a long time).

also, i'm not entirely sure i understood what happened, plot-wise.