South Scrimshaw

South Scrimshaw

released on Jun 09, 2023

South Scrimshaw

released on Jun 09, 2023

A science-fiction visual novel in the style of a nature documentary.


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Fantastic storytelling!
A genuinely fascinating world

incredibly good. short, sweet, moving. biggest issue is that it's only part 1 of an unfinished story. and that it uses ai voicework i guess, but from what i can tell the solo creator has gone to great pains to ensure that the training data used for the ai has been sourced from open access archives with permission from the original creators, which is more than can be said for most other users of generative ai. i'm looking forward to part 2 either way

A fictitious nature documentary about whales on an alien planet not dissimilar from Earth, told through a series of beautiful images. I thought the art was really good and the narrative of the documentary (including the various asides) was believable and compelling in a way that sci-fi often fails to be without being clinical and boring.

What let South Scrimshaw down a little for me is the AI narration. At points it was glaringly obvious, different voices having different pronunciations of the same word and the main narrator slipped from a British accent into an Australian one on a few rare occasions that made it clear I was not listening to a human. I feel like it shouldn't have been that hard to find people willing to lend their voices to this.

A visual novel with the stylings of a nature documentary set on a foreign planet, player interaction is limited to advancing the story from page to page and occasionally investigating a highlighted word. The story is engaging, though I’m predisposed to this sort of story as a nature doc fan, so your mileage may vary. It’s largest detraction is that there’s nothing that would keep this from being a graphic novel—it doesn’t harness the media of video gaming in any novel ways.

A nature documentary visual novel with beautiful art and music that evokes a keen sense of place, firmly submerging you in its aquatic alien world. Following a new-born whale over the course of it's childhood years, the narrative is both touching and informative. The world building here is excellent, offering just enough intricacies and tangential information without overwhelming or distracting from the core tale.

The entire run-time is about an hour, and crazily it's also free, so I would strongly recommend anyone gives it a try. One of the most engrossing pieces of video game world-building I've experienced, and certainly the most I've connected with a visual novel. I can't wait to see our whale calf mature into adulthood in Part 2.

A really creative VN which simulates the style of a nature documentary in an alien planet. It's a bit short but it has some great worldbuilding and I really want to see what other curious species are the focus of next parts.