Honestly? I like it. Shame it's a very short game.
The concepts of how much Alan loathes his darker part are pretty good and having the Dark Place take physical manifestation of him is pretty good. While also grasping the stuck in purgatory hell syndrome, which is somewhat relatable (Twin Peaks wink wink wonk wonk in the corner) I know it's you BOB xD
Also man Scratch is the perfect kind of guy that you hate but also like due to his shenanigans. (He ain't laying a finger on Barry or Alice or so god help me)