The first half of this chapter (while good) felt way too obvious out it's themes about love and it is the weaker half of this chapter but it really picked it self back up around the time of the first twilight. I feel like parts of my problems in this chapter is how I really do not care for the relationship between Shannon and George (I like the other relationships, like Jessica and Kannon as well as Battler and Beatrice). The foreshadowing of the Logic Error was also done well but my dumbass thought it was meant to represent Ange and how she is close to her family and yet cannot reach them (not because she can't leave the room but because they are dead). This chapter managed to hate Erika even more especially when it's revealed that she killed all the previous "victims" to ensure that they were dead (I love Dlanor tho).



(I might change the rating after I finish reading the entire VN)

Edit: changed from 5 stars to 4.5 stars

Reviewed on Mar 05, 2024


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