Omori's biggest problem is that it's just too long, which is odd given that some of the battle mechanics feel undercooked. There's only one fight where the emotion system was fully utilized and after that, I could usually brute force everything. As far as the length, it needed to lose at least 5 hours. That said, outside of meandering in a whale, I don't know specifically what I would cut.

8/25 - All that said, Omori is one of those games that sticks with you for a while and it deserves more credit than I initially gave it.