La poesía de esta obra encierra, en mi opinión, un poco de cerrazón. Como si la falta de acción y de posibilidades se intensificara al final pero nos dejara en vilo. Tal vez se deba a que esta obra no se siente acabada. Al poema que se nos recita parece que le faltan un par de estrofas, y es muy probable que cuando acabe It's Summer, de un par de años después, esa sensación cambie.
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The poetics in this are, in my opinion, a bit lacking. As if the lack of action and possibility wanted to intensify the ending, but left it hanging. Perhaps it's because it doesn't feel finished. The poem that is recited to us seems to be missing a couple of stanzas, and it is very likely that when I play "It's Summer" I'll manage to change my feelings about it.
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The poetics in this are, in my opinion, a bit lacking. As if the lack of action and possibility wanted to intensify the ending, but left it hanging. Perhaps it's because it doesn't feel finished. The poem that is recited to us seems to be missing a couple of stanzas, and it is very likely that when I play "It's Summer" I'll manage to change my feelings about it.