it's not really anything more than just a fanfic given the visual novel treatment, which i guess is really cool for whoever wrote it but besides some nice moments of just flynn and carl alone time, goofin off (which i think is pretty well written, kinda feels like they just were ripped straight from Echo) once the shirt comes off it just devolves to generic furry porn
which i am here for, just wanna make that clear, i'm traaaaaaaaash lmao

i really wish there was more to it, honestly. something to, i guess, justify it's presence in the itch.io page for the Echo Project? I feel like there was potential to be able to explore Flynn's feelings of Carl, and Carl's feelings of trying to express some of his desires in this way. I still like it, the two cg pieces are good, but besides being some nice wish fulfillment for me there's not a lot going for this lmao
extra 1/2 star because flynn sucks at dark souls. just like me fr!