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Definitely not a shining example of what Choice of Games fiction can be. I finished this in what must have been less than half an hour, which is incredibly underwhelming and ridiculous, and I see a lot of feedback on the forums from people also calling this one rushed, incomplete, short, etc. I'm inclined to agree with all of it. Characters are shallow, the 'dramatic climax' is a page long, the ending is abrupt, the relationships are unsatisfying, and all of its anti-racism allegory attempts are clumsy and amateurish.