Horrendous pacing and a story that's kinda all over the place. Definitely an improvement over the original game in terms of general story quality and characters. That said, I feel it's also just not a very good remake in terms of improving what worked about the original (deciding instead to just throw out almost everything). It's not terrible or anything, just not very good.

the first time I played an eroge and actively wondered if it passed the bechdel test