I'm not sure how much of this game's problems are related to the poor translation quality. That definitely has something to do with it, but generally it compares very poorly to Hollow Ataraxia and also has Nasu wilding out a lot more. There's an axiom that women go to therapy and men make their sexual disorders into books or movies, and this really makes me think about that concept because there is so much neurotic id on display here. I don't hate Nasu for it, I just think this isn't that interesting of a story, despite some good moments.