A very fun second chapter. I thought cyberworld was cool and felt different from the first chapter with some unique ideas. Loving the story still and I'm interested to see how it continues after that ending because what. Also Susie staying over was so cute I really like her character growth so far. Berdly I am so sorry but girl you were annoying so many times throughout this chapter. I also didn't like how aspects of this chapter felt similar to the last like the final act being in the villain's mansion because we were captured and put in a cell for example and I hope that future chapters make that different so it isn't the same sort of structure everytime.

Reviewed on Apr 22, 2024


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